Creative writing

       Subject.   
      Oh my goddess, what a beautiful tree! How could I live without this masterpiece in my garden? I can smell every flower, I feel everything on this tree, from bacteria to birds. Look! Squirrel is having fun on this incredible tree. It's her home, I am so jealous that I can't live on this fabulous tree too. However, I can decorate this apple tree for Halloween or Christmas. I feel like it's the best gift I have ever received in my whole life! Thanks god, he made such a pretty tree! Can you imagine that my children would eat apples from this tree? I can, I have an exact dream in my head. 
        Feeling.  
      I feel like I can fly into the azure sky! What a feeling... Caterpillars just turned to butterflies in my stomach, that is why I feel lighter than oxygen in the air.  I am a daydreamer with eyes that make you shine brighter than a star.  I can feel the Earth's breath, that is why I am happy! That is why I can make you laugh, when you don't even want to smile. Smile for me, then you will grow your happy plant inside your own soul. You should try. Smile for me.

1. Adj/adverbs
2. vivid verbs
3. not tell, but show
4. comparisons